In the 201980's I planted a seed and it grew into a tree it was amagi
In the 1980s I planted a seed and it grew into a tree. It was a magical tree i saw a door on it and I went
In the tree and it teleported me in to the 2019. And l saw the. Fwtwre me. I looked young and metal. I had a metal face, I was half robot and half human. I had a jet pack and I had a robot gun.
Reflection: in writing I am learning to add detail to make my story interesting. I am proud because I am checking my punctuation. I need to improve on adding adjectives.
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Keep working hard to add more detail to your stories. Mrs Platt and Mrs Robertson
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